Hailstorm - edit3
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Quote: "Filler" may even relax the reader a bit, setting him up for the next shock or strike.

'Filler' = unnecessary words. I'm suggesting that the house not be built with asbestos insulation, not that you replace it with shredded canvas from the Louvre :-)
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Hailstorm - edit3 - by dukealien - 07-14-2016, 10:10 PM
RE: Hailstorm - by ellajam - 07-14-2016, 10:25 PM
RE: Hailstorm - by Erthona - 07-14-2016, 11:05 PM
RE: Hailstorm - by dukealien - 07-15-2016, 10:25 PM
RE: Hailstorm - edit1 - by Achebe - 07-15-2016, 11:24 PM
RE: Hailstorm - edit1 - by dukealien - 07-17-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit2 (achebe) - by Lizzie - 07-18-2016, 01:20 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit2 (achebe) - by dukealien - 07-18-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: Hailstorm - edit2 (achebe) - by Achebe - 07-18-2016, 11:29 PM
RE: Hailstorm - edit2 (achebe) - by dukealien - 07-19-2016, 11:51 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit2 (achebe) - by Achebe - 07-20-2016, 07:50 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit3 - by dukealien - 07-21-2016, 05:37 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit3 - by kolemath - 08-12-2016, 03:15 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit3 - by just mercedes - 08-12-2016, 06:13 AM
RE: Hailstorm - edit3 - by dukealien - 08-13-2016, 11:01 PM



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