Do not be cross with poetry

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Ok, but maybe some people like hearing the sounds of sex and that's what does it for them; maybe some people write poems that feel good to say or sound lovely to the ear, and that's their only goal.

Well, anything is possible. Could see an asteroid crash into an alien tomorrow. Surely won't be telling that story because that's not my experience. Groans and moans don't do it for me. And when critiquing, I'll be sure to point that out, even if the groans and moans are something more I cannot see.

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But you critique it as a shitty bird poem cause that's all you got.

Sorry, but if all I see is a narrative on birds and trees, that narrative on birds and tress had better make sense as well as any other substitute narrative.

If meaning doesn't matter then why is it important that the narrative on birds and trees makes sense? Because, of course, it affects your enjoyment of the peice.