To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing)
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Thanks JDofing, I'll correct the "large", good catch.

dale

Shem,

It's a perspective piece, kind of like if you were painting a person from all different sides. I think the nuance comes with the last two lines. I've already written one on addiction. Here is the link

 http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-19067.html


Evidently I neglected to post it, so I posted it in fun, or maybe I posted it under a different title.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing) - by Erthona - 07-16-2016, 04:18 AM
RE: To An Addict - by shemthepenman - 07-16-2016, 05:04 AM
RE: To An Addict - by Hennessy473 - 07-16-2016, 01:58 PM
RE: To An Addict - by Erthona - 07-18-2016, 01:14 AM
RE: To An Addict - by shemthepenman - 07-18-2016, 01:39 PM
RE: To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing) - by GordonBillett - 08-05-2016, 10:27 AM
RE: To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing) - by surrealHead - 08-29-2016, 06:37 PM
RE: To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing) - by j.l.dean - 09-07-2016, 10:49 AM
RE: To An Addict (edit shem, JDofing) - by fred.fp - 09-09-2016, 11:21 AM



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