Wind, not weather vane

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Wind, not weather vane

Achebe Offline

The Fourth Stooge

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07-15-2016, 08:56 AM

Thanks, Ella, dale. This is a piece from a decade ago that I'm looking to revise. Your comments are quite helpful. I'm not happy with the the metre either, will fix that.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Wind, not weather vane - by Achebe - 07-14-2016, 02:20 PM

RE: Wind, not weather vane - by ellajam - 07-14-2016, 07:42 PM

RE: Wind, not weather vane - by Erthona - 07-15-2016, 08:47 AM

RE: Wind, not weather vane - by Achebe - 07-15-2016, 08:56 AM

RE: Wind, not weather vane - by Lizzie - 11-02-2017, 03:39 AM

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