Critics Manufacture A Famine
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Contraceptive sublimation
and subliminal agony bear
a smiling rupture through the heart
then a stitch along the tear.
 
Like Dada, where no bards are barred,
out-elbowed words begin!
We know that we'd be happy there
[add arbitrary rhyme here].



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Contraceptive sublimation
and subliminal agony bear
a smiling rupture through the heart
then a stitch along the tear.
 
Like Dada, where no bards are barred
and out-elbowed words begin,
we know that we'd be happy there
but how we love this mess we're in.




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Contraceptive sublimation

and subliminal agony bear
a smiling rupture through the heart
then a stitch along the tear.
 
Like Dada, where no bards are barred,
where out-elbowed words begin,
we know that we'd be happy there
but like the mess we're in.





[this is an old one that survived the mass deletion of 2015]


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Critics Manufacture A Famine - by shemthepenman - 07-13-2016, 02:53 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Lizzie - 07-13-2016, 03:56 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 04:21 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 04:49 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 05:06 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 05:07 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: Critics Manufacture A Famine - by Leanne - 07-13-2016, 11:26 AM



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