The Watch Man -- version 1.1

The Watch Man -- version 1.1

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07-09-2016, 03:16 AM

(07-09-2016, 12:37 AM)LunaDeLore Wrote: Lizz,

I love it, love it;
love
it :

The revision makes this poem read so much better !!!!!

Good work.

Luna

Luna, I'm so glad that revision worked for you Smile

Thanks again for your feedback, it pushed me to re-imagine that strophe.

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Messages In This Thread

The Watch Man -- version 1.1 - by Lizzie - 07-01-2016, 12:09 PM

RE: The Watch Man - by Leanne - 07-01-2016, 04:25 PM

RE: The Watch Man - by Achebe - 07-01-2016, 11:58 PM

RE: The Watch Man - by just mercedes - 07-02-2016, 06:15 AM

RE: The Watch Man - by Lizzie - 07-02-2016, 02:55 PM

RE: The Watch Man - by LunaDeLore - 07-07-2016, 02:10 AM

RE: The Watch Man - by Lizzie - 07-07-2016, 08:19 AM

RE: The Watch Man -- edit 1 - by Lizzie - 07-08-2016, 12:52 PM

RE: The Watch Man -- edit 1 - by LunaDeLore - 07-09-2016, 12:37 AM

RE: The Watch Man -- edit 1 - by Lizzie - 07-09-2016, 03:16 AM

RE: The Watch Man -- edit 1 - by REW - 07-12-2016, 01:01 PM

RE: The Watch Man -- edit 1 - by Lizzie - 07-12-2016, 02:47 PM

RE: The Watch Man -- edit 1 - by REW - 07-13-2016, 01:29 AM

RE: The Watch Man -- version 1.1 -- REW - by Lizzie - 08-28-2016, 05:21 PM

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