07-06-2016, 04:14 AM
I love this part of the site because its full of hidden gems and this one is no exception, it is not only a great example of why we should workshop poems its also delivers stunning images giving the reader privileged insight into aspects of family life that we can all nod in agreement with. I'm done, great job Mercedes and a nod to Todd for not letting it slip away. Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

