07-02-2016, 04:06 AM
(07-01-2016, 11:33 AM)shemthepenman Wrote:Some poems are fun to write even if the content is shadowed, and after reading your reply I can pick up on the humor or fun in the write from the very first line.(07-01-2016, 09:33 AM)LunaDeLore Wrote: I'm with Todd, for sure. I mean, this experience just ain't fun...BUT, I will say this; most people gotta love something enough to change, and that love can sober addiction.yes, i suppose this isn't the correct forum for this one, Todd was right [as he usually is]. it is a bit grim to be in ' for fun'. i thinkĀ my reason for posting it here was simply that it was actually fun to write. or, at least, i enjoyed writing it - but also, i do think there is a certain black humour to it. thanks for reading!
Good work
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)

