Which is more constructive?

[QDeathstar]

sometimes it's really effective to tell someone "stop. your poem sucks, you suck, and spending your time regurgitating lyrics from a 90s pop band isn't doing anyone any favors. Seriously, this shit you just posted makes me wonder if it you'd be better finding a tall building. Jesus Christ. A deeper cut? really? That's what you came up with. Just shut the fuck up and slice up your arm, not across it. Thanks for the read"


but, I'm not allowed. It's easier to point at shit than to uncover gold. It might be wiser to dig for gold, but when I critique I generally settle for shit.