Winds of Anger
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rhymeguy, I don't get to use the internet every day, due to poverty and hatred, and I believe you have to study a poet in order to understand a poet's poems. I'm of that sort. And I keep finding your poetry generic. What I mean by that, is that you are stating the obvious in obvious ways. It's harder to write poetry in this mode nowaday, because the end of the world, and all its aparchments has already happened, years ago, in some lucky jerk's already imagination. Imagination is more important than skill. Imagination without skill though is lame. This goes for a lot of poetry. I am not a good critic, and so limit myself to pointing things out here, lazily, with you.

There is no difference in a desert and an oasis. Difference is lightweight in a poem.
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Winds of Anger - by rhymeguy - 06-26-2016, 08:08 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by Erthona - 06-27-2016, 02:33 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by D.MYST - 09-02-2016, 04:42 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by Achebe - 06-28-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by rhymeguy - 06-29-2016, 02:34 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by Achebe - 06-30-2016, 05:48 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by rowens - 06-30-2016, 03:03 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by rowens - 06-30-2016, 11:08 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by SethFiction - 08-27-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by operadiva - 09-11-2016, 08:58 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by 89layers - 09-11-2016, 03:22 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by mv5543 - 12-12-2016, 05:16 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by CRNDLSM - 12-13-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: Winds of Anger - by Wonderfullife - 12-30-2016, 08:49 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by It Howls from Below - 01-02-2017, 03:27 PM
RE: Winds of Anger - by Rogo - 01-03-2017, 06:05 AM



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