Laundry Line, Edit #2

Laundry Line, Edit #2

Lizzie Offline

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06-30-2016, 07:49 AM

Kole, thanks for coming back to this poem, especially since it's a repeat.

This ending has been kicking my butt for far too long and I agree that it's not perfect.
I see what you're saying about the inconsistencies and I'll keep trying to come up with something better.

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Laundry Line, Edit #2 - by Lizzie - 05-23-2016, 08:40 AM

RE: Laundry Line - by aschueler - 05-23-2016, 09:10 AM

RE: Laundry Line - by Lizzie - 05-23-2016, 10:41 AM

RE: Laundry Line - by Cousin Kil - 05-23-2016, 12:17 PM

RE: Laundry Line - by Lizzie - 05-23-2016, 01:25 PM

RE: Laundry Line - by Todd - 05-23-2016, 05:05 PM

RE: Laundry Line: Rewrite 1 - by Lizzie - 05-24-2016, 05:31 PM

RE: Laundry Line: Rewrite 1 - by Todd - 05-25-2016, 12:20 AM

RE: Laundry Line: Rewrite 1 - by Caleb Murdock - 05-25-2016, 06:23 PM

RE: Laundry Line: Rewrite 1 - by kolemath - 05-26-2016, 08:56 AM

RE: Laundry Line: Rewrite 1 - by Todd - 05-27-2016, 01:28 AM

RE: Laundry Line, Edit #2 - by Lizzie - 06-26-2016, 07:30 AM

RE: Laundry Line, Edit #2 - by kolemath - 06-29-2016, 11:36 PM

RE: Laundry Line, Edit #2 -- Todd, Kole, CousinKil - by Lizzie - 06-30-2016, 07:49 AM

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