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[LunaDeLore]

I don't like poems that capitalize the first word of every line.  Sorry.  Need to say that up front.  

The poem itself is a vis-a'-vis of implied meaning.  Now you see me, now you don't.  That's the way it reads to me.  It might or it might not.  I don't mind the subject and you do end on somewhat a positive note...so I like that it has a somewhat finish to it.  A "just not today" attitude.  The earthy tone is good (e.g. terra cotta, all the flowers) and it is consistent.  The language of the poem is a plus for me.  

I don't know...the poem is so unexciting that it doesn't excite me too much as a reader.  Show me a reason to care.

I know what you mean about the capitalization, I don't necessarily like it either. When it comes to writing poetry, Word gives me a hell of a time. I may fix that. You know, when I wrote this I probably didn't know if it would come together for me or not so that may explain the "vis-a-vis"....

Appreciate your comments

Luna