06-27-2016, 03:04 AM
I find this poem inconstant. The poorly chosen title "Wind Passes" implies that wind power was once used, but it has been supplanted, yet the line "arrest its gusts in windmill manacles to power each home’s snug establishment" seems to belie that idea.
The rhyme "particles" --> "manacles" just seemed strange to me, don't really know why, but it caused me to pause in my reading.
"Today we see mere random particles" "mere" is obviously a filler word, and to be completely objective "we" do not
see " random particles", at least I do not. And even if true, to what point?
I still think you owe us a fart poem
dale
The rhyme "particles" --> "manacles" just seemed strange to me, don't really know why, but it caused me to pause in my reading.
"Today we see mere random particles" "mere" is obviously a filler word, and to be completely objective "we" do not
see " random particles", at least I do not. And even if true, to what point?
I still think you owe us a fart poem
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.