06-26-2016, 11:47 PM
Ugh, the subject's the kind of ungraceful I despise -- obvious teeth-dirt! Ugh. Milk mustaches! ugh. Stickers and price tags! ugh. Mass rape, murder, and mutilation! nice. Must be some sort of OCD or something -- my psychiatrist says it might. Otherwise, the poem does its job, and the title is just too funny --
I've never actually experienced a proper breakup, though, so all this reminds me of is this: http://www.octopuspie.com/2016-05-11/900...-held-out/ but no, that's actually emotional. This may be so, but it's too high-and-mighty sort of funny to be so, I think. Again, nice work, aside from the whole image of it (xD)
I've never actually experienced a proper breakup, though, so all this reminds me of is this: http://www.octopuspie.com/2016-05-11/900...-held-out/ but no, that's actually emotional. This may be so, but it's too high-and-mighty sort of funny to be so, I think. Again, nice work, aside from the whole image of it (xD)