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[Achebe]

Hi Luna - you can tighten up the intro. It's currently too conversational, like prose. Boring to read.
You should also consider sticking to a single metaphor and consistent imagery.
You start with sunflowers and Autumn then go to tides, then relics and a terracotta floor. Too all over the place.
Suggested edit of S1 below

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Sitting here wrenching out words
That won’t flow today
But when the sun shines
After the camellia blooms
Have rotted back into the ground.