Tainted

[RiverNotch]

I'll definitely get into this with more meat: I'm kinda liking this already, with a cursory read. But I do feel like I'm missing something -- I kinda like ironic, abrupt endings, but ten and eleven feel like they're just build-ups to something bigger, and twelve, well, it's not the good sort of ironic, especially for something as delicate and detailed as this. But yeah, I'll get back to this -- right now, another thought that's bugging me that I can surely say needs more development is the recurrence of the word "memories".