A dance of creation (Edit 1)

[Joseph Didis]

Grammatically it sounds awkward without 'the', and I also think that it suits the rhythm better to include it.

I really like the idea of the repeat sign   good thinking.

Also I think it might be kind of neat to finish with the tail saying to the head "Bite me!" if you think it would suit the theme of the poem. Just a thought

Thank you, I am happy you think it made the poem better with repeat signs.

I really like the idea of ending it with the tail saying bite me, I am just trying to come up with a good ending stanza where it would fit. 

Thank you very much for your comments and the time you have put into this, it is much appreciated!