A dance of creation (Edit 1)

[Magpie]

About this, I read it in this way:

See mi ngly   se pa rate,
se cre tly   same,
Lo sing  them selves
In their names

Do you still think "the" would be better..I am not a native english speaker so I might pronounce it wrong?

Grammatically it sounds awkward without 'the', and I also think that it suits the rhythm better to include it.

I really like the idea of the repeat sign   good thinking.

Also I think it might be kind of neat to finish with the tail saying to the head "Bite me!" if you think it would suit the theme of the poem. Just a thought