A dance of creation (Edit 1)
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(06-15-2016, 11:33 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  Hi Joseph,

When you say infinite loop do you mean a lemniscate like these ∞ ∞ ∞ ∞ ∞ 
If that's what you wanted to use you could just copy and paste them from here  Thumbsup

Enjoy the football  Smile

Mark

Addition: Actually I had another thought, perhaps you meant a repeat sign for music notation |:     :| if so I think that is a unique idea as it would create the infinite loop.
The music notation was how I meant, thank you very much for looking it up so I could copy paste it. Smile

I liked the palindrome idea, and I still think a bit about it, but I don't have much experience with them so have to read a few to see if there is something I like to use. I think I might leave that for another poem.

About this, I read it in this way:

See mi ngly   se pa rate,
se cre tly   same,
Lo sing  them selves
In their names

Do you still think "the" would be better..I am not a native english speaker so I might pronounce it wrong?
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Messages In This Thread
A dance of creation (Edit 1) - by Joseph Didis - 06-13-2016, 02:28 AM
RE: A dance of creation - by Magpie - 06-13-2016, 04:23 PM
RE: A dance of creation - by Joseph Didis - 06-15-2016, 08:05 PM
RE: A dance of creation - by Magpie - 06-15-2016, 11:33 PM
RE: A dance of creation - by Joseph Didis - 06-16-2016, 03:53 AM
RE: A dance of creation - by Magpie - 06-16-2016, 05:30 AM
RE: A dance of creation - by Joseph Didis - 06-21-2016, 06:42 PM



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