Sex or Music EDIT 1 (now ORGAN SYMPHONY WITH ORCHESTRA)

[tectak]

I appreciate everyone's readings; I've simplified things and hope the essence isn't lost!

Thanks to Mark and Leanne for poking holes in the weak title, word choice, and metaphor connections.

@tectak--never has poem demolition been so entertaining. thanks for being blunt.  I was avoiding the wordiness subjunctive, but realize I was losing more than gaining by keeping things in present tense. (btw...finishing together is easy if you have the right partner).

@vanity--i hope the sexy is more sexy

Good egg,
whe I said finishing at the same time I meant the same year
Best, tectak
Good edit,too.