06-15-2016, 07:43 AM
My original was:
ravens tossed
in the windy sky
billowy clouds
Think I'll revise it back.
And yes, I agree that it may have only one image to convey, but what an image it was that provoked this haiku. I can't prove it, but it sure seemed like they were having fun being tossed around in the wind and gusts over the backyard yesterday. It was an extraordinary moment to behold.
![[Image: TossedRavens.jpg]](http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee16/ricks_photo_album/TossedRavens.jpg)
ravens tossed
in the windy sky
billowy clouds
Think I'll revise it back.
And yes, I agree that it may have only one image to convey, but what an image it was that provoked this haiku. I can't prove it, but it sure seemed like they were having fun being tossed around in the wind and gusts over the backyard yesterday. It was an extraordinary moment to behold.