ravens tossed
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Could easily be worded as a simple sentence.

Storm clouds toss ravens above tree tops.

It's an image, well formed, but hardly unique. Nor does it carry with it more than the image.

The wind
blows golden grain
in the field

That's a little more cliche, but similar in terms of all that is conveyed is an image.


Best,


dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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ravens tossed - by justlikeyou - 06-14-2016, 09:59 PM
RE: ravens tossed - by Magpie - 06-15-2016, 05:28 AM
RE: ravens tossed - by Erthona - 06-15-2016, 06:50 AM
RE: ravens tossed - by justlikeyou - 06-15-2016, 07:43 AM



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