the first taste

the first taste - edit 2

justcloudy Offline

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06-15-2016, 06:33 AM

Edit 2 is lovely Kole! The story comes through well-- it's amusing and poignant-- and it's a pleasure to read. Nicely done, what a great example of workshopping!

-jc

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the first taste - edit 2 - by kolemath - 05-29-2016, 11:48 AM

RE: the first taste - by Caleb Murdock - 05-29-2016, 03:00 PM

RE: the first taste - by justcloudy - 05-30-2016, 12:24 AM

RE: the first taste - by Caleb Murdock - 05-30-2016, 02:52 PM

RE: the first taste - by Lizzie - 05-31-2016, 02:50 AM

RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-03-2016, 04:44 AM

RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-12-2016, 11:39 AM

RE: the first taste - by milo - 06-12-2016, 12:56 PM

RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-14-2016, 09:22 AM

RE: the first taste - edit 2 - by justcloudy - 06-15-2016, 06:33 AM

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