ravens tossed

[Magpie]

Hi, I like the image and the idea, I think you could invert it and have the ravens on the last line, for me that reads slightly better. The middle line works well as a pivot because both the ravens and clouds are above the treetops.

How about storm clouds instead of stormy clouds? 

I would also be tempted to change 'tossed' but that is because I'm British and in Britain it has additional meanings and this is probably influencing my thinking. 

Just a couple of thoughts, thanks for the read,

Mark