the first taste

the first taste - edit 2

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06-12-2016, 11:39 AM

thanks to everyone for helping me think this one through. the first draft quickly went from one of my favorite poems to something I couldn't stand reading. the above edit is the product of much hammering and tough love

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the first taste - edit 2 - by kolemath - 05-29-2016, 11:48 AM

RE: the first taste - by Caleb Murdock - 05-29-2016, 03:00 PM

RE: the first taste - by justcloudy - 05-30-2016, 12:24 AM

RE: the first taste - by Caleb Murdock - 05-30-2016, 02:52 PM

RE: the first taste - by Lizzie - 05-31-2016, 02:50 AM

RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-03-2016, 04:44 AM

RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-12-2016, 11:39 AM

RE: the first taste - by milo - 06-12-2016, 12:56 PM

RE: the first taste - by kolemath - 06-14-2016, 09:22 AM

RE: the first taste - edit 2 - by justcloudy - 06-15-2016, 06:33 AM

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