Echo
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Thanks for Todd's comments.

The motif of this little piece is about personal identity. I try to express a Buddhist like view.

Central Ideas: Self (or ego, mind, free will, afterlife spirit....) in a sense, sounds like an inner voice, which arouses a person to think (to do this or that), rather than a real object from which I identify who I am.

Emotions Behind: Who am I? I flee my self on water and pointlessly swaying away with night sea breeze. I also feel my "inner voice" somehow like sirens sing.
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Echo - by PoetCraft - 06-03-2016, 01:39 PM
RE: Echo - by shemthepenman - 06-03-2016, 03:25 PM
RE: Echo - by PoetCraft - 06-03-2016, 03:51 PM
RE: Echo - by Achebe - 06-03-2016, 03:53 PM
RE: Echo - by PoetCraft - 06-03-2016, 04:02 PM
RE: Echo - by Achebe - 06-03-2016, 04:31 PM
RE: Echo - by shemthepenman - 06-03-2016, 05:18 PM
RE: Echo - by Todd - 06-04-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Echo - by PoetCraft - 06-05-2016, 01:23 AM
RE: Echo - by amejadcc - 07-28-2016, 06:46 PM
RE: Echo - by RiverNotch - 07-29-2016, 12:11 AM
RE: Echo - by bluegypsea - 08-01-2016, 06:54 AM
RE: Echo - by Wex - 08-04-2016, 07:36 AM
RE: Echo - by billy - 08-04-2016, 11:24 AM
RE: Echo - by GordonBillett - 08-05-2016, 10:06 AM
RE: Echo - by sapril - 08-05-2016, 02:07 PM
RE: Echo - by poet-rice - 08-06-2016, 08:44 AM
RE: Echo - by maximuswolf - 08-07-2016, 12:38 PM
RE: Echo - by dared - 08-15-2016, 11:50 AM
RE: Echo - by Erthona - 08-16-2016, 03:35 PM



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