Iconostasis, edit 2: Caleb, Mark, Joseph, Matt, Achebe
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Iconostasis, edit 2: Caleb, Mark, Joseph, Matt, Achebe
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06-04-2016, 08:26 PM
Essentially -- not exactly with the same premises on my part, but with the same logic. I'll mull over the return to third person, but the removal of the "let me" cleans it up mighty -- edit two, coming up could be that I'm a bit too tied to the rhythms of the current wording, so not yet -- hopefully sometime soon, maybe Monday. Thanks again!
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Iconostasis, edit 2: Caleb, Mark, Joseph, Matt, Achebe - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 01:45 AM
RE: Basilica - by Caleb Murdock - 05-31-2016, 09:38 AM
RE: Basilica - by Magpie - 06-01-2016, 12:38 AM
RE: Basilica - by RiverNotch - 06-01-2016, 01:17 PM
RE: Basilica - by Magpie - 06-05-2016, 04:51 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Joseph Didis - 06-02-2016, 03:55 AM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Mattp - 06-02-2016, 09:13 AM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Achebe - 06-03-2016, 05:26 AM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by RiverNotch - 06-04-2016, 08:00 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Achebe - 06-04-2016, 08:08 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by RiverNotch - 06-04-2016, 08:26 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Achebe - 06-04-2016, 09:23 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by RiverNotch - 06-06-2016, 06:37 PM
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