Justice is an Egg [Edit]

Justice is an Egg [Edit]

Mattp

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06-04-2016, 05:44 AM

I think drawing out the strong segments and rebuilding the poem around them is a great idea. I do that frequently (my first drafts are invariably rubbish). This is definately worth salvaging. Looking forward to the revision,

- Matt

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Justice is an Egg [Edit] - by dukealien - 05-30-2016, 07:06 AM

RE: Justice is an Egg - by Mattp - 06-02-2016, 08:52 AM

RE: Justice is an Egg - by dukealien - 06-02-2016, 10:15 PM

RE: Justice is an Egg - by Mattp - 06-04-2016, 05:44 AM

RE: Justice is an Egg - by QDeathstar - 06-04-2016, 12:31 PM

RE: Justice is an Egg - by dukealien - 06-05-2016, 07:31 AM

RE: Justice is an Egg - by CRNDLSM - 09-11-2016, 07:48 AM

RE: Justice is an Egg [Edit] - by dukealien - 09-11-2016, 11:13 AM

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