Iconostasis, edit 2: Caleb, Mark, Joseph, Matt, Achebe
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Iconostasis, edit 2: Caleb, Mark, Joseph, Matt, Achebe
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06-02-2016, 09:13 AM
River, this may sound a little odd, but I think you're missing a line. It just seems to me that you need one more phrase to tie it all together and make your intent and your meaning clear. I'm really not sure what that line would constitute. I suspect, as such, that this crit may be borderline useless. Ah well.
 All the best, Matt 
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Iconostasis, edit 2: Caleb, Mark, Joseph, Matt, Achebe - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 01:45 AM
RE: Basilica - by Caleb Murdock - 05-31-2016, 09:38 AM
RE: Basilica - by Magpie - 06-01-2016, 12:38 AM
RE: Basilica - by RiverNotch - 06-01-2016, 01:17 PM
RE: Basilica - by Magpie - 06-05-2016, 04:51 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Joseph Didis - 06-02-2016, 03:55 AM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Mattp - 06-02-2016, 09:13 AM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Achebe - 06-03-2016, 05:26 AM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by RiverNotch - 06-04-2016, 08:00 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Achebe - 06-04-2016, 08:08 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by RiverNotch - 06-04-2016, 08:26 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by Achebe - 06-04-2016, 09:23 PM
RE: Icon, edit 1: Caleb, Mark - by RiverNotch - 06-06-2016, 06:37 PM
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