06-02-2016, 03:55 AM
I really liked the read, I think I also don't get all the symbolism, but I don't think it matters, it stands on it's own anyway.
I only have a very short comment, I lack a sort of "how to" in it..As in, how can I (whomever the poem is written to) let you cover the stone heart with gold and azure?
Do you want help, should I step aside and let you do the work, something else altogether? Have I been holding you back from doing this before? Maybe it is all, whichever the reader can do?
Thank you for sharing this poem!
I only have a very short comment, I lack a sort of "how to" in it..As in, how can I (whomever the poem is written to) let you cover the stone heart with gold and azure?
Do you want help, should I step aside and let you do the work, something else altogether? Have I been holding you back from doing this before? Maybe it is all, whichever the reader can do?
Thank you for sharing this poem!