"rhyme is seen as anachronistic by most poets"
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By the way Leanne, you're so effing good with form it shrinks my pee-pee to the size of ant.  That poem you wrote "War Games" was a perfect example of impeccable formatic control (although I'm still trying to get a handle on exactly who the "we" and the "you" in it are (my bad) ).

Off topic...I still think the poetry put forth this year here during NPM was exceptional.  In my mind, the best year I've seen here so far, by a good measure (just MO).  I totally dug checking in here and reading them all, and being surprised.  Really appreciated.  There's a part of me that still wants to compile my faves, and say something about them (it's an ego thing).  

And by the way, who's this Todd guy?  How did he keep being so damn human throughout?  

Anyway...just wanted to say...
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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RE: "rhyme is seen as anachronistic by most poets" - by NobodyNothing - 06-01-2016, 11:41 AM



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