Ageless is a mother’s love (edited)

[kolemath]

I love the tone of this poem, but i'm having trouble telling who's who. I hear a mother caring for an infant and a daughter caring for an aging mother.  Was this your intention? blending this generational care? S1 is led by 'i' S2 shifts into 'my own' with a 'she' to close.  maybe work on clarifying the poem's speaker?

powerful opening lines!!!

maybe work on the wordiness of 'as she hacked it from her lungs' ? as her lungs hacked ....

Love future's mirror!