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[Magpie]

Hi Rogo,

I quickly just wanted to say that it is best if you post your newest version of the poem at the very top before everything else. Hopefully no-one will come along and leave comments on your original without realising.

I'll come back to this and leave a critique later on. And also, as regards 'litany of throes', it was yours all along anyway as I'm sure that is what you must have been thinking somehow. 

Cheers,

Mark