Name Game
#4
Beautiful execution on a theme that resonates well with me. Smile

I liked the Builder Bob reference, never heard of Joe the plumber before, but guess it matters little.
You could think if rearrangeing these lines though:

Were I a Joe,
would I be a plumber?
Were I a Bob,
would I be a builder?

Do names limit lives
as tracks limit destinations?

I’ve yet to know Cletus the theorist.

I also agree with Todd's comment that "unnamed" should end a line, maybe just cut "because"..The last line is a great ending anyway.

Thank you for sharing your work. Smile


Messages In This Thread
Name Game - by kolemath - 05-24-2016, 09:46 AM
RE: Name Game - by Universalchild - 05-24-2016, 08:42 PM
RE: Name Game - by Todd - 05-24-2016, 10:56 PM
RE: Name Game - by kolemath - 05-25-2016, 09:52 AM
RE: Name Game - by Joseph Didis - 05-26-2016, 03:51 PM
RE: Name Game - by kolemath - 05-27-2016, 03:46 AM
RE: Name Game - by Joseph Didis - 05-25-2016, 01:47 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!