05-24-2016, 07:59 AM
Rogo - I like this. I understand it as a quick glance at gaming. In such capacity I think it works. A few nits, though. For one, this notion of glancing at a screen doesn't work with the gaming theme - games require concentration. For another this idea of editing "now" confuses me. Not sure what you meant there.
On the whole though I think this is inventive. Looking forward to more of yours. Cheers,
- Matt
On the whole though I think this is inventive. Looking forward to more of yours. Cheers,
- Matt
