05-23-2016, 05:10 AM
Cousin-- I actually really liked the idea you brought with your initial interpretation. "Trunk" is a cool word. One way or another I want the reader to bring his/her own ideas to anything I write-- I strive for ambiguity within reason. Meaning "she" can be whoever you want: crone, elephant, tree... they're all matriarchs at the end of the day. Thanks for your thoughts on the edit, and for the encouragement!
Weeded-- I appreciate your thoughts, thanks for commenting!
-jc
Weeded-- I appreciate your thoughts, thanks for commenting!
-jc
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.

