05-21-2016, 11:18 PM
Hey Blueprint, yea I have trouble with punctuation. It just doesn't come naturally to me, maybe because I have no real education about this sort of thing. Ill try and shape that up a little bit.
Deathstar, you are totally right they are cliche as hell, Ill see if I can't find a way to make those lines my own a little more
And Joseph, again I'll try to put some punctuation in here.
It would be great if when I do I can put it up again and get some suggestions on how to improve it because although I (sometimes) know how to punctuate a sentence correctly but I don't know how to use it to influence my poetry.
Deathstar, you are totally right they are cliche as hell, Ill see if I can't find a way to make those lines my own a little more
And Joseph, again I'll try to put some punctuation in here.
It would be great if when I do I can put it up again and get some suggestions on how to improve it because although I (sometimes) know how to punctuate a sentence correctly but I don't know how to use it to influence my poetry.