05-21-2016, 01:24 PM
The style this poem is written in is interesting, with all the imagery and symbolism you put into the piece, but the message seems a bit vague. It is almost like you are talking about one really deep thought, but then you drift off from what you were talking about. This also gets me thinking about the meaning, since it probably means something different to you than to me. Overall, it is a nice poem that gets my gears turning.

