05-19-2016, 06:17 PM
Caleb, thanks for your thoughts there. I usually get grammar but lay lie lies etc catches everyone sometimes.
I am a family doctor, it's from a real scene. Will work through it once more to clarify. And surprisingly, people are often lucid.
The emotion is there, it's just too "matter of fact".
I am a family doctor, it's from a real scene. Will work through it once more to clarify. And surprisingly, people are often lucid.
The emotion is there, it's just too "matter of fact".