The Oliphants Get a Parade

[milo]

milo,

This is fantastic.  It has a very Rudyard Kipling feel.  I like the dialect or accent, whatever it is, it's magnetic.  Also, really wish there was music to go along for it's just the sort of thing that could get stuck going round in one's head for a week.    

--Quix

Thanks, quix. I was going through the napm stuff and was sadly getting ready to dump this as there is no practical use for it in the world of poetry but it makes me laugh for some reason.