05-18-2016, 01:28 PM
I like the way the poem sounds, and I like much of the imagery, though I don't understand the meaning of the poem. It seems to me that you are trying to say something both universal and personal, and doing so in language which has specific meaning to you but may not be clear to a reader. In other words, not everyone will necessarily understand your symbolism. You obviously understand what you mean by terms like "the devine", "fragile parchment", "sacred shadows of the cosmos", "old actors", etc., but will your readers?