05-16-2016, 10:26 AM
this bit is quite striking and well done:
The sky composes itself
through that pin prick
of the vanishing crow,
Not sure why you repeated caws / cause (including 'caw' that's 3 'caws' + caw's plus 2 cause's).
Otherwise, it's a fun read.
The sky composes itself
through that pin prick
of the vanishing crow,
Not sure why you repeated caws / cause (including 'caw' that's 3 'caws' + caw's plus 2 cause's).
Otherwise, it's a fun read.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe