Of Trailers and Torture, revision

[Lizzie]

Leanne, thanks so much for your feedback! You're right that the exposed + bare was redundant. I'll fix that. And, I'll work a bit more on the "Tiny" issue. The wiring under the house line (and, I really should have said trailer, so that was a slip up) was supposed to be a play on the underwire of a bra. There's usually some wiring on the underside of a house....I don't know. I was just trying really hard to work "underwire" in somewhere, but I'm not married to that particular line. Yes, knockers was intentional! A total groan, I know.

Thanks for clarifying what I can post in which forum, also.