Of Trailers and Torture, revision

[Leanne]

Lizzie, this is quite a well-constructed work with images that fit together very nicely. The bra metaphor is odd at first, but you keep it going so that it seems exactly right. This is the For Fun forum, so I won't go into too much detail with critique but I do think your work would stand up to more rigorous examination, so if you'd like to move it to a critique forum just say the word.