Edit - Ballad of the Wooden Pallet

Edit - Ballad of the Wooden Pallet

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05-08-2016, 01:47 PM

i think the chinese line didn't work for me was because the same line in the other verses start with a soft sil. okay in some it starts with a hard sil. after reding it another 5 or 6 times it could me who isn't working but i do still stall on it for some reason.

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Edit - Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by dukealien - 05-07-2016, 12:02 PM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by billy - 05-07-2016, 01:39 PM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by just mercedes - 05-07-2016, 04:45 PM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by ellajam - 05-07-2016, 07:19 PM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by Achebe - 05-08-2016, 12:40 AM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by Jae Mc Donnell - 05-08-2016, 01:56 AM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by dukealien - 05-08-2016, 07:39 AM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by billy - 05-08-2016, 01:47 PM

RE: Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by ellajam - 05-08-2016, 07:43 PM

RE: Edit - Ballad of the Wooden Pallet - by dukealien - 05-09-2016, 11:16 PM

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