Edit - Ballad of the Wooden Pallet

[Jae Mc Donnell]

Ballad of the Wooden Pallet

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(Light verse, but audiences have liked this one.  The order of stanzas seems a bit arbitrary - I'm mainly interested in ideas on which should be moved or cut.  Though any other critiques are also welcome, of course.)

I must say, this was very enjoyable. What a subject choice. I'm not leaving critique or anything, just letting you know job well done