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NaPM April 25 2016
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04-30-2016, 05:37 AM
@Leanne: Like this a lot for content and execution. I would love to see you expand on the strophe with the names. Even keeping the structure of "There is no more rain for Tara [add detail etc]. I don't know if you've read it but sort of like how Marge Piercy handled Joy Road and Livernois. Good read though.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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NaPM April 25 2016 - by milo - 04-25-2016, 11:26 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-25-2016, 11:49 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by NobodyNothing - 04-25-2016, 11:52 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Keith - 04-26-2016, 01:56 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-25-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-25-2016, 11:58 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Achebe - 04-25-2016, 07:22 PM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-25-2016, 10:01 PM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by REW - 04-26-2016, 03:56 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by bedeep - 04-26-2016, 12:23 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-26-2016, 01:28 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by REW - 04-26-2016, 01:29 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-26-2016, 01:33 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by LunaDeLore - 04-26-2016, 02:22 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Todd - 04-26-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Keith - 04-26-2016, 05:59 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by bedeep - 04-26-2016, 09:03 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-26-2016, 09:44 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-26-2016, 10:21 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by billy - 04-26-2016, 03:42 PM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Keith - 04-27-2016, 07:36 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by RiverNotch - 04-27-2016, 06:34 PM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Leanne - 04-30-2016, 05:10 AM
RE: NaPM April 25 2016 - by Todd - 04-30-2016, 05:37 AM
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