NaPM April 28 2016

NaPM April 28 2016

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#20

04-29-2016, 10:13 PM

Not OTT at all, at all. (I did note the tense change within the last stanza which should probably be made consistent throughout the poem, past or present, at some point... but it in no way lessened the impact of the piece.)

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NaPM April 28 2016 - by milo - 04-28-2016, 12:08 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-28-2016, 01:30 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Todd - 04-28-2016, 02:50 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by bedeep - 04-28-2016, 08:50 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Todd - 04-28-2016, 10:58 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by bedeep - 04-28-2016, 11:13 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Todd - 04-28-2016, 11:14 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-29-2016, 12:03 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by bedeep - 04-29-2016, 12:23 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-29-2016, 12:33 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Achebe - 04-29-2016, 12:52 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-29-2016, 01:12 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Achebe - 04-29-2016, 01:22 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by REW - 04-29-2016, 07:43 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-29-2016, 10:15 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-29-2016, 12:45 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Keith - 04-29-2016, 06:12 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by bedeep - 04-29-2016, 07:53 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Keith - 04-29-2016, 08:55 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by bedeep - 04-29-2016, 10:13 PM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Keith - 04-30-2016, 04:37 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by bedeep - 04-30-2016, 07:50 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by Leanne - 04-30-2016, 06:20 AM

RE: NaPM April 28 2016 - by RiverNotch - 05-04-2016, 02:02 PM

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