NaPM April 28 2016

[Achebe]

Achebe - I love the sounds, the echoes, rhymes and rhythms - the craft of this is marvelous.  When I read 'runes' I thought ruins, which fits too with the narrative, but 'runes' is the perfect word.  Nice.  You have had a strong NaPo month.  I have enjoyed reading your poems although I admit there are many references that went over my head.

thanks, Teagan. that's very kind of you 

PS: I made a minor change in L8, to get rid of what I thought was one too many 'forget's