Pretty Boy

[humility]

you're right, there is nothingness....but somehow you have failed to understand the meaning behind this piece at all. we're well beyond hand holding stage...haha. do you have any constructive criticism at all?

I can't really give constructive criticism, just my reaction. Sorry. And I guess I thought since the narrator I guess? Do poems have narrators? Said they wished they had been holding hands I thought that meant they weren't holding hands. So I was kind of just picturing two people who had feelings for each other but hadn't done anything to express them. And instead were just blankly staring at the scenery.